Vilkku92 said: Duly noted, we are still in characters introduction mode. So not much can be known about all the characters yet~Favorite character... I'm not sure if I have have one yet, the story so far has been so short I haven't had much time to form any strong opinions on them. I suppose I like Lolita the most so far, but that's probably only because she's had the most screen time so far. |
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| This is just a post to inform you that the work on the 5th skit is proceeding smoothly. I plan to release it as soon as I can :> |
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Memor said: Ahaha~ ^^@SweetMonia Sasuga Hime, she's the hero we needed :3 Also, is that a new character or? ^^ That's Lolita by the way~ |
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| Yes, she looks lovely in shoujo style :3 |
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| I had to stop, despite the fact I was almost done. I am currently organizing things right here, so that whenever I continue working on the skit. I keep at it for a long time. |
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Memor said: No, I mean here where I am sitting. ^^@SweetMonia By "here" you mean this cafe? Omo well either way, I wish you luck :3 and try not to overwork yourself silly~ ^^ ❤ Okay, but for the record, I am not the kind of people that overwork themselves :3 |
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| @SweetMonia So here's my thought's on the skits: First, I have to say: excellent job. I love your skits. xD The amount of work spent is seemingly astronomical for a single person work... Characters: Art: Story: It's a skit, so it's sure to not have much, but beginning skit 4, you gave a mysterious background to the story and characters, which makes us eager to read more. The school + princess is a nice setting and all, but having a background to everything makes it all the more good. Monia is quite mysterious too. She knows about the staff.... And that Anyhow, looking forward to more! Or more works from you. ^_^ |
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Dobato said: Hello Dobato-Nyan~@SweetMonia So here's my thought's on the skits: First, I have to say: excellent job. I love your skits. xD The amount of work spent is seemingly astronomical for a single person work... Characters: Art: Story: It's a skit, so it's sure to not have much, but beginning skit 4, you gave a mysterious background to the story and characters, which makes us eager to read more. The school + princess is a nice setting and all, but having a background to everything makes it all the more good. Monia is quite mysterious too. She knows about the staff.... And that Anyhow, looking forward to more! Or more works from you. ^_^ Sorry for taking my Monia time responding to you, specially since I quire appreciate good feedback like the one you just game moi ^^ I am quite happy you like the skits. I can't imagine how more you would like them once I execute the plans that are on my head right now. I get excited just thinking about them :) Lolita is just lovely, and I am yet to show everything about her, since that would spoil the main story for everyone. The same goes for the other girls. I totally believe I could showcase them very well, even within the limits of the skits. I believe I didn't give you & the other reader the right impression about Vivianne & Beauty, since Vivianne only showed one dimension of her personality, while Beauty is just arrogant, and not really a tsundere ^^ As for your suggestion, don't worry! I already have plans up to skit #8, so I know what I am going to do :D >>>> More CGs you say? Ahaha~ As for the art, I like it how different people noticed different things in the backgrounds, though there are few ester eggs no one discovered so far, which is a bit sad... At least you managed to discover all the Gochuumon ones, which is all good. I hope you liked the Miémorrinian stock market as well~ mhmm, and there's a good chance you're going to see more & more shoujo art in the future~ :> I will keep your advice in mind, with the exception with the one about Richelieu, as who would ever care about that......... JK XD As for skit #4, it feels different because it's actually a part of the main story. The historical part at the beginning showcases my other story "The Legend Of Miémorrina:- Let There Be Peace". I hope you liked my Monia & Melissa designs. Particularly Monia the café owner. I am quite glad you liked her design. I did my best to make her well-balanced within the thin line of cuteness & sexiness. I am so proud of her~ :3 Out of curiosity, have you discovered the twist in skit #4? >>>> Nooooooo, Yuri ga nai :O I will try to release more skits, dear Dobato. If only things weren't a complete mess here (which I have been taking care of, of course). I have a lot of expectations of this project, and so I will support it with all my might ^^ If you have any question or suggestion, feel free to contact me about it anytime you like. I am always open to hear from you~ |
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| @SweetMonia Ok, so let me start off by saying that I really enjoyed reading through your VN skits. I could only ponder as to the amount of work and love you placed into your gamu especially considering it was a solo job. Its works like these that earn a special place in my heart and its not easy to do btw >_< . So really good job! Cast of Characters: Art: Overall, I loved all the characters and particularly Rina due to her art style and the love the bowties, frills, and ribbons <3 except for Richelieu :P (Gomen gomen :>). As for the amount of characters, it helped that you kept the interactions just between two to three people and gradually built upon that into skit#4 which paved a natural progression of the story here. Anyways, when you do get around releasing more skits, I would love to take a look at them and give you some feedback and also some more cover story between Vivianne and Beauty would help flesh them out a bit, but really lovable characters nonetheless and nice use of the music as well as I found it appropriate especially around Lolita's shenanigans. Anyways, I look forward to hearing back from you and just to note here that the suggestions I gave you are just that suggestions. Good work! |
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NiteLite2B said: Before anything, I so love your feedback, dear LiteNeko. Not everyone would write a detailed feedback like that ^^@SweetMonia Ok, so let me start off by saying that I really enjoyed reading through your VN skits. I could only ponder as to the amount of work and love you placed into your gamu especially considering it was a solo job. Its works like these that earn a special place in my heart and its not easy to do btw >_< . So really good job! Cast of Characters: Art: Overall, I loved all the characters and particularly Rina due to her art style and the love the bowties, frills, and ribbons <3 except for Richelieu :P (Gomen gomen :>). As for the amount of characters, it helped that you kept the interactions just between two to three people and gradually built upon that into skit#4 which paved a natural progression of the story here. Anyways, when you do get around releasing more skits, I would love to take a look at them and give you some feedback and also some more cover story between Vivianne and Beauty would help flesh them out a bit, but really lovable characters nonetheless and nice use of the music as well as I found it appropriate especially around Lolita's shenanigans. Anyways, I look forward to hearing back from you and just to note here that the suggestions I gave you are just that suggestions. Good work! I am so glad you liked the skits so far. That makes me wonder how you will like the main story once I make it. Since Lolita Caramel isn't exactly a "Cute Girls Doing Cute Things" as it may suggest~ :3 It's nice that Rina has made an impact on you. I read your paragraph about her many times for that. She's easily likable from the feedbacks I got so far. That makes me proud of her. Now, for the other characters, I probably didn't have enough screen time to show Vivianne's personality, but trust me, she's probably more likable than many of the other girls. Depending on your preferences. It looks like you managed to get Beauty well during her short screen time. Yes, she's pompous, maybe even more than you have see so far. I guess Lolita was just good at dealing with her during skit #3. As for Sophie, just wait until you see her act authoritatively as the princess she is. I am sure that would look cool on her. Maybe like this:- Sophie can be quite elegant. By design, she's pretty much a loli Melissa by the way:-  Lily never appeared in the skits, are you probably referring to Monia? Since everything you said about her fits Monia quite well. Here are a picture with all the announced characters for the skits:- I would love to have people see & know Lily, she's just a great character. Even her flaws are lovable. For real:-  Richelieu could have been drawn better for sure. Nice to see you liked him. He makes a good combination with Lolita, just like in the following picture:- As for the clothing, I quite enjoy making them look the best way possible. I think I could do it even better, which could mean more satisfactions from my readers. ^^ What I like about the scenery is that I could show you & everyone else how Miémorrina looks like. As close to how I imagine it as possible. You probably saw the picture on the café. That was from skit #5, and it shows Monia city, as it was mentioned ^^ Monia Café is built on the top of a hill, so from the windows, you can look down at the forest besides it. The patio/courtyard is also on the top of the hill. So if I got you right, there's no mistake there. You can see a very beautiful scenery from the courtyard by the way ^^ Hmmm, so many people ask me about skit #4. The first part of it was taken from "The Legend Of Miémorrina:- Let There Be Peace", which is another one of my stories. Where Monia & Melissa unified Miémorrina after being exiled. So far, all my stories are interconnected. Including Lolita Caramel & my other light novel "How To Follow The Perfect Girl". It makes the reader feel more immersed in the universe I created. The reason Skit #4 was different is because it's part of the main story, so the vibes were slightly different. To be specific, the 4th skit is where Sophie's arc starts. And yes, Monia knows about the location of the cane. She just never told that to Sophie. You probably know it all by now, but here's a short explanation in the following spoiler, in case you wanted to know:- Don't worry, I have plans up until skit #8, plans I am sure you're going to like. ^^ Nice to see you liked the musique so far. I will pick even better ones in the future ^^ I want to release more skits myself, I have plans for that this year. Just wish me luck with them. There are a lot I have in mind for them :3 >>>> Just to let you know. I love you suggestions~ <3 |
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| Dear everyone, Lolita Caramel 5th skit is to be released in 23 June. You can play all the previous skits for free from here Please stay tuned :3 |
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Dear everyone, Lolita Caramel 5th skit is available now. You can download it from here Have fun~ |
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| nice, thanks for the update :) |
Liddo-kun said: You're always welcome! Please consider downloading it when you have the time~ :>nice, thanks for the update :) |
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| the character designs are very kawaii. Will find the time for this of course. I just need to finish an an anime convention report first... Is this VN voiced? |
Liddo-kun said: Yosh! And yes, I tried my best to make them good looking :3the character designs are very kawaii. Will find the time for this of course. I just need to finish an an anime convention report first... Is this VN voiced? Unfortunately, it's hard to have voices in it right now |
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| Naisu, I'll try to play it tomorrow ^^ |
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Memor said: Okay Mure~Naisu, I'll try to play it tomorrow :3 |
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| Hai, hai~ |
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