Not trying to be mean, but if you are going to write a review, please use proper grammar. Also, you shouldn't rate an anime on what you wanted to happen, because not everything will go your way. And last, don't start out by saying your overall score. Instead give your scores for all the aspects of the show so readers know why you gave it a 4 overall. Without that your review looks biased and weighted in your opinion which we know nothing of.
When writing a review, while I obviously have no right to tell you what to do, you might want to consider a) using proper grammar and b) having some sort of format for your review. If you don't, it tends to look sloppy, and people won't tend to like your review.
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