Your review post is vague and doesn't analyze the manga's critical parts. For example, instead of discussing the art, you just gave a personal statement. The question you should answer is, "What kind of art should the reader look forward to?" The only thing you basically talk about is the author killing off the characters. If this occurs during the final chapters, then you spoiled the manga for your readers.
Suggestion: Reread and follow MAL's Review Guidelines by answering all the questions from each category. That will make your future reviews more informative.
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Suggestion: Reread and follow MAL's Review Guidelines by answering all the questions from each category. That will make your future reviews more informative.
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