Ah, looking forward to it. I haven't play the 1st and 2nd skit, but I will play it maybe this weekend :D |
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SweetMegumin said: No problem Megu, takes your time, just make sure to yell me what you think about it here. ^^Ah, looking forward to it. I haven't play the 1st and 2nd skit, but I will play it maybe this weekend :D |
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| @SweetMonia By the way, how can I download the third skit? do I just redownload the whole game? |
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SweetMonia said: SweetMegumin said: No problem Megu, takes your time, just make sure to yell me what you think about it here. ^^Ah, looking forward to it. I haven't play the 1st and 2nd skit, but I will play it maybe this weekend :D No need to yell, I will send my review via Fireworks and Explosion :D |
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SweetButlerKou said: Yes, redownload the whole thing, and you will get the option to play the 3rd skit starts~@SweetMonia By the way, how can I download the third skit? do I just redownload the whole game? |
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SweetMegumin said: Hai, hai. ^^SweetMonia said: No problem Megu, takes your time, just make sure to yell me what you think about it here. ^^ No need to yell, I will send my review via Fireworks and Explosion :D |
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| Interesting.. I'll give this a try some time :D |
IcecreamDrew said: Cool! I hope it turns out to be to your liking~Interesting.. I'll give this a try some time :D |
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| oh, I'll play this soon. Seems really cute! |
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| wooww, I´m a bit proud to know a person who make visual novels! mainly because I´m watching nowadays Saenai Heroine no Sodatekata, hehehe! I´ll see the youtube videos and later give an opinion. |
| It seems really cute and interesting! I'll definitely give it a try once I'm done with playing Steins;Gate 0 ~~ |
| Great Job *-* |
| Looks really neat, I'll give it a play on my free time. This makes me remember of planning on scripting in a group of writers, and artists in high school. Did you make this by yourself? Great job, keep it up. |
TohkaKotori said: Cool! I will be waiting to hear your opinion on it ^^Looks like it's time to check the 3rd skit. Hysen said: Okay, I hope you like it, dear Hysen~oh, I'll play this soon. Seems really cute! |
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betoharu said: Nihaha~ I like that Anime by the way ^^wooww, I´m a bit proud to know a person who make visual novels! mainly because I´m watching nowadays Saenai Heroine no Sodatekata, hehehe! I´ll see the youtube videos and later give an opinion. I will be waiting for your opinion on it ^^ |
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Sewik said: That would be nice, since the opinion of someone who played visual novels before is always welcome~It seems really cute and interesting! I'll definitely give it a try once I'm done with playing Steins;Gate 0 ~~ EusTass-Amino said: Merci~ Great Job *-* |
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Eruin said: So you have experience doing that, or something similar?Looks really neat, I'll give it a play on my free time. This makes me remember of planning on scripting in a group of writers, and artists in high school. Did you make this by yourself? Great job, keep it up. Yes, I did almost everything on my own~ I hope you like it, please share your opinion about it with me once you play it~ |
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| How much time did it take you to make this? |
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Maledict said: I didn't count the time, but at least 30-40 hours (if not much more)~How much time did it take you to make this? |
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SweetMonia said: So you have experience doing that, or something similar? Yes, I did almost everything on my own~ I hope you like it, please share your opinion about it with me once you play it~ Yeah, kind of. I would just do the scripting though, the others handle the rest (drawing, story, music, etc.). Is this your first vn? You would just keep getting better at this if you keep this up, and find opportunities in the future. |
| Did you make it yourself? |
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| I will watch when I finish off my anime |
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| Nice achievement, gotta play it later :D |
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| You made this? That is really awesome! I'll download and play it later. |
Lord_Sithis said: Yes~ :3L O L I S < 3 Eruin said: It sounds like fun, how was the final product by the way? :DSweetMonia said: So you have experience doing that, or something similar? Yes, I did almost everything on my own~ I hope you like it, please share your opinion about it with me once you play it~ Yeah, kind of. I would just do the scripting though, the others handle the rest (drawing, story, music, etc.). Is this your first vn? You would just keep getting better at this if you keep this up, and find opportunities in the future. Yes, it's my first. I plan to do this long-term if things went well, which I hope it will be the case. :) |
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FerdinandSurya said: Yes, I did everything except for the musique~ :>Did you make it yourself? Bot199623 said: Cool! I hope you like it. Tell me what you think of it once you do~I will watch when I finish off my anime |
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S0rahana said: Yes, it took me quite a while to finish it. I hope you enjoy it by the way~ :>Nice achievement, gotta play it later :D |
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| Indeed! I am proud of it~ :) I am curious to know what you think of it now~ |
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Eell said: The skits are Shoujo, Slice of Life, Drama & Comedy.What's the genre? The main story (which hasn't started), may have about 2 more genres~ |
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SweetMonia said: It sounds like fun, how was the final product by the way? :D Yes, it's my first. I plan to do this long-term if things went well, which I hope it will be the case. :) It was fun from my part, we had to drop it though since others had higher priorities. I see, you could also try sharing it to vn forums if you want more feedback, otherwise, keep it up, it's a nice hobby ^^ |
| Nicely done. I just love the music. |
tdtv-bkt432 said: Merci tdtv~Wow, great jobs. Eruin said: That's sad to hear, it is fun to see the final product & people's reaction to it.SweetMonia said: It sounds like fun, how was the final product by the way? :D Yes, it's my first. I plan to do this long-term if things went well, which I hope it will be the case. :) It was fun from my part, we had to drop it though since others had higher priorities. I see, you could also try sharing it to vn forums if you want more feedback, otherwise, keep it up, it's a nice hobby ^^ Good suggestion! I plan to do something like that once the quality gets a bit better. Creating these stories is time consuming, but it's surely fun. ^^ |
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YuriCarrier said: mhmm, I spent quite some time picking those up.Nicely done. I just love the music. Who's your favorite character by the way? |
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SweetMonia said: That's sad to hear, it is fun to see the final product & people's reaction to it. Good suggestion! I plan to do something like that once the quality gets a bit better. Creating these stories is time consuming, but it's surely fun. ^^ True, well, it was fun doing it, especially the choices, the possible outcomes just keep branching out the further you get. Yeah, you might even get good offers/opportunities from some big vn groups out there ^^ As long as you have a wide imagination, you will never run out of ideas for your story. |
Eruin said: Yeah, that's why I am keeping the choices limited for now, I may do something about that later on~SweetMonia said: That's sad to hear, it is fun to see the final product & people's reaction to it. Good suggestion! I plan to do something like that once the quality gets a bit better. Creating these stories is time consuming, but it's surely fun. ^^ True, well, it was fun doing it, especially the choices, the possible outcomes just keep branching out the further you get. Yeah, you might even get good offers/opportunities from some big vn groups out there ^^ As long as you have a wide imagination, you will never run out of ideas for your story. You made me curious, what kind of offers? :) I have a wide imagination, which's why I am creating this. There are many things I want to show to people that are in my head right now~ ^^ |
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SweetMonia said: YuriCarrier said: mhmm, I spent quite some time picking those up.Nicely done. I just love the music. Who's your favorite character by the way? My favorite character would be Vivianne. I'm a fan of purple hair characters plus I like her more strict yet understanding attitude. |
SweetMonia said: Yeah, that's why I am keeping the choices limited for now, I may do something about that later on~ You made me curious, what kind of offers? :) I have a wide imagination, which's why I am creating this. There are many things I want to show to people that are in my head right now~ ^^ There's a number of groups out there looking for designers, writers, scripters, etc. and some of those are aiming for greater opportunities, and you might just be the one they're looking for ^^ |
| Wait do you animate the characters yourself? If so, great job! |
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| its short XDD but afterall its the good one :D |
| Thanks for sharing. Looks nice, and good luck with your work. ",) |
| just played this, its great... nice sol..... skit 3 was all about beating Richelieu eh.... -_-nya~ |
| Pointing the good points out, the music truly fits in, especially in the "Is there Richelieu can't do?" part (as I call it, XD), as it brought a rather excited vibe while playing. Next, additional sprites (yay!) it gave more emotions to the characters and last, the story, it is an enjoyable experience where Lolita tries and finds a way to catch her butler off guard. (I find it cliche, but your execution was indeed great, because of she did at least caught him off guard and asking some ideas.) The only bad point I find is Richelieu's sprite is distorted. (*cries in Paku*) The eyes were nearly even in size (for someone who is looking at a slight off front, I could be wrong though, please do correct me if I am), the chin was a bit high and his left arm. That one flaw aside, the third skit was really fun and did enjoyed it. Now I'd like to see Rina and Sophie meet in the succeeding skits. :) |
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| humm, let´s say my first impressions about the visual novel. that´s an opinion from a person that only saw one or two visuals novels... Iliked the use of an "western" soundtrack, and a more "western" background, even the characters look like anime girls. That´s make a better approach to western public (well, at least it´s what I think...) for the first video, the story seems good for me. I missed some "loops" in the sountrack. I don´t know if it´s common some "silence" in a visual novel. I´ll see the rest of videos to focus more in the story. I´ll recommend your visual novel to others, thanks! |
| I'm also planning to make a Visual Novel in the future, but I don't have the technical skills to do so. What I can only do for now is to write stories/plots. I'm counting on a friend to help me out on the work in the future though (hopefully) I'd definitely give this a go as soon as I have the time! |
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| Downloading the game, looks gud to me though. |
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YuriCarrier said: Yeah, she may be misunderstood by some, but I like that about her too~SweetMonia said: mhmm, I spent quite some time picking those up. Who's your favorite character by the way? My favorite character would be Vivianne. I'm a fan of purple hair characters plus I like her more strict yet understanding attitude. Eruin said: That's flattering, and who knows, maybe I will work with them someday~SweetMonia said: Yeah, that's why I am keeping the choices limited for now, I may do something about that later on~ You made me curious, what kind of offers? :) I have a wide imagination, which's why I am creating this. There are many things I want to show to people that are in my head right now~ ^^ There's a number of groups out there looking for designers, writers, scripters, etc. and some of those are aiming for greater opportunities, and you might just be the one they're looking for ^^ |
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BigEDMan said: Thank you! And yes, I do almost everything myself ^^Wait do you animate the characters yourself? If so, great job! |
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