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![]() Hey! I made this manga page in my free time few month ago, it's in frech and you have to read in the manga original order, can you tell me what do you think I can do better and what do you think about it ?Dec 14, 2020 11:20 AM |
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Zoushu | Dec 25, 2020 2:57 PM
Cool! It's just one page so of course it can't have a lot of story, but there's stuff happening and there's some humor so that's nice.
I also think stuff can be done with the art. The lines do indeed look a bit jaggedy. In the first panel, the brown-haired girl's chair and the table are not drawn from the same perspective. She and her chair should be seen more from above. I also agree the shading could use some work. However, I like how you colored the hair, it's pretty smooth I think. |
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AoiZoldyck | Dec 14, 2020 12:09 PM
@Ringtomb actually I agree with you, I'm pretty bad with a computer.
I will try doing this with paper, I am better doing that. |
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Ringtomb | Dec 14, 2020 12:00 PM
If you walk away and look at it from a distance, it looks great. Other than that, there doesn't seem to be a lot of control in the drawing. The lines have an off putting jaggedness to them, the computer added effects seem phoned in, and the shading is only mediocre. If I were you I would draw on a piece of paper then scan it or take a photo. I'm glad you a trying, the only way to get better at drawing is to keep doing it! |
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AoiZoldyck | Dec 14, 2020 11:27 AM
Translation (right to left):
-Hurry up, we already finished drawing !
-I almost finished !
-here !!! (approximate translation 😥)
-Is that me ?!
-That's really awful!
-I bet you guys are jealous!
It's a pretty old drawing for me 😅 |
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